So this is some of Hisham's on-going stories that some of you maybe have read on sb
I just copied and paste... and Hisham did under the stress of all us ladies (and a boy) giving
comments during his writing
Ok - I don't have the first stories, but I will paste here the ones that I did copy..
It was supposed to be a "under the sheets" story but now I have my doubts...
I remember it stared with Susan who was heartbroken.. went to a nude beach (!!) alone,
and was rescued by a dashing man (yes, I do read Jane Austen )
Remember to thank hisham
Susan sat at the patio of her beach house with her diary in her hands
the thoughts kept spinning inside her head , she began to write ......
i couldn't forget and didn't even try to
because i know my self i will not have the power to do so
and every time i try forget u i remember u more vividly
i promised my self and swore to my heart over a 100 times
that i'll not think of u no matter what'll happen
and not 1 of those promises i fulfilled
every time i see someone , i see ur features on his face
my heart is confusing me , is it with me against u ? or is it against me ?
every time i remember u , i become mad at my self , and in the same time i become mad at my self if i forget for even a little while .....
Susan closed her diary roughly and said to her self : no Tom i'll be able to , i'll be able to forget u and move on ....... end of Promo
at 9 pm , Tom stood in front the window of his condo
he kept thinking about the worst day of his life , the day he made the choice to break up with Susan ......
he cut himself abruptly and sighed : ( what's done is done, there no use of thinking about it . i wish u a happy life Susan ).
(yeah ? ) snorted a voice inside his head
( once upon a time there was someone who cared about u )
once upon a time there was a tenderness inside that someone's heart who took care of u
and u and ur heart are all alone now ....
that person gave u her heart and u tossed it away like it was some disgusting piece of meet no matter what was the excuses u'v made
there' nothing on Earth that will make forget her , now u regret what have u done ? pffft taste the same wine u made her drink
Tom hugged himself tightly and suddenly it became hard to breath ....... End of promo 2
Susan lay on the bed with Lucas , her mouth hovering near his ...
she began to kiss his jaw with a feathery weight kisses till she reached his nick
she began to bite and suck his nick playfully
and playing with his earlobe .....
Lucas became more and more aroused with his earlobe being played with
she slid her hand to his chest and reached for his nipple and started pinching it
Lucas said with a husky voice : Susan if u keep doing that , it will be over soon ...
Susan grabbed his nick with both hands and began choking him
she said with a deadly tone : why didn't u save me huh? ....... i'll never forgive u for it
Lucas woke suddenly , shaking and his sweat covering his body and the sheets ... yeah there is some damp sheets are made from the fear swear . end of p #3
Tom sat in restaurant with his friends , they did every tuesday a night of standup to share thought and poetry
(hello everyone , this one called u walked away )
said the man at mike
(i'm here calling for u , assure me , how have u been )
(i'm here at the same place , feeling jaded ,it's been so long )
(u walked away and i left my heart with u )
(i haven't any idea how to forget u , i even breath ur love and and everything within me , i left with u )
i haven't any idea how to forget u , i even breath ur love and and everything within me , i left with u )
(i'm here calling for u , assure me , how have u been)
thank u very much , said the man
while the audience was clapping , tom slid out and headed for a dark corner
e began to sob then (i'm sorry .... i'm so sorry ).....end sneak peak
8 months ago .....
Susan sat quiet for a long time , then she said :
so this is it ? u r going to end it just like this ? like u r some child with a toy and u tossed it aside when u got bored ? Susan asked incredulously.
Tom looked at her with so much calm inside him , she was about to choke the life out of him
Tom said : we r like the tips of two mountains , Susan , we'll never connect , i hope u'll have a nice life . then he stormed out of her house
present day .........
Susan ? SUSAN? shouted Lucas
Susan came to her self again and asked him : hmmm did u said something ?
Lucas : i asked u where do u live ? i'll walk u to u house
Susan: oh yes sorry . i live at the corner of this street .
she was confused why she had this memory at this moment ?
maybe because she was staring at Lucas's eyes and found her self making comparison with Tom's eyes
maybe because Tom eyes color was blue like a sea at a sunny day , and tom's was gray like a cloudy day
they began to walk slowly to the house
Lucas : so what brings u here is it a vacation or do u live here ?
Susan : i wasn't sure , month ago i thought it was a vacation and after a week i decided to move here permanently , i just bought the house and moved my stuff into it
Lucas : wow , i guess u love this place so much , u left ur old life quickly and moved like this * he snapped his fingers *
he laughed to himself quietly , wow what a nice voice thought Susan
Susan : i guess i needed a fresh start i had some savings and i don't use them , so i said to my self why not * she shrugged *
Lucas : a fresh start ? hmmm don't all we need one sometimes ? *he sighed to himself*
To be continued... (by hisham.. on sb.. )