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    Star (MM/MF) Original Story - Missing Chances - (Ongoing)


    So this is some of Hisham's on-going stories that some of you maybe have read on sb
    I just copied and paste... and Hisham did under the stress of all us ladies (and a boy) giving
    comments during his writing

    Ok - I don't have the first stories, but I will paste here the ones that I did copy..

    It was supposed to be a "under the sheets" story but now I have my doubts...

    I remember it stared with Susan who was heartbroken.. went to a nude beach (!!) alone,
    and was rescued by a dashing man (yes, I do read Jane Austen )

    Remember to thank hisham



    No. I


    Susan sat at the patio of her beach house with her diary in her hands
    the thoughts kept spinning inside her head , she began to write ......
    i couldn't forget and didn't even try to
    because i know my self i will not have the power to do so
    and every time i try forget u i remember u more vividly
    i promised my self and swore to my heart over a 100 times
    that i'll not think of u no matter what'll happen
    and not 1 of those promises i fulfilled
    every time i see someone , i see ur features on his face
    my heart is confusing me , is it with me against u ? or is it against me ?
    every time i remember u , i become mad at my self , and in the same time i become mad at my self if i forget for even a little while .....
    Susan closed her diary roughly and said to her self : no Tom i'll be able to , i'll be able to forget u and move on ....... end of Promo



    No. II


    at 9 pm , Tom stood in front the window of his condo
    he kept thinking about the worst day of his life , the day he made the choice to break up with Susan ......
    he cut himself abruptly and sighed : ( what's done is done, there no use of thinking about it . i wish u a happy life Susan ).
    (yeah ? ) snorted a voice inside his head
    ( once upon a time there was someone who cared about u )
    once upon a time there was a tenderness inside that someone's heart who took care of u
    and u and ur heart are all alone now ....
    that person gave u her heart and u tossed it away like it was some disgusting piece of meet no matter what was the excuses u'v made
    there' nothing on Earth that will make forget her , now u regret what have u done ? pffft taste the same wine u made her drink
    Tom hugged himself tightly and suddenly it became hard to breath ....... End of promo 2



    No. III




    Susan lay on the bed with Lucas , her mouth hovering near his ...
    she began to kiss his jaw with a feathery weight kisses till she reached his nick
    she began to bite and suck his nick playfully
    and playing with his earlobe .....
    Lucas became more and more aroused with his earlobe being played with
    she slid her hand to his chest and reached for his nipple and started pinching it
    Lucas said with a husky voice : Susan if u keep doing that , it will be over soon ...
    Susan grabbed his nick with both hands and began choking him

    she said with a deadly tone : why didn't u save me huh? ....... i'll never forgive u for it
    Lucas woke suddenly , shaking and his sweat covering his body and the sheets ... yeah there is some damp sheets are made from the fear swear . end of p #3


    No. IV



    Tom sat in restaurant with his friends , they did every tuesday a night of standup to share thought and poetry
    (hello everyone , this one called u walked away )
    said the man at mike
    (i'm here calling for u , assure me , how have u been )
    (i'm here at the same place , feeling jaded ,it's been so long )
    (u walked away and i left my heart with u )
    (i haven't any idea how to forget u , i even breath ur love and and everything within me , i left with u )
    i haven't any idea how to forget u , i even breath ur love and and everything within me , i left with u )
    (i'm here calling for u , assure me , how have u been)
    thank u very much , said the man
    while the audience was clapping , tom slid out and headed for a dark corner
    e began to sob then (i'm sorry .... i'm so sorry ).....end sneak peak




    No. V


    8 months ago .....
    Susan sat quiet for a long time , then she said :
    so this is it ? u r going to end it just like this ? like u r some child with a toy and u tossed it aside when u got bored ? Susan asked incredulously.
    Tom looked at her with so much calm inside him , she was about to choke the life out of him
    Tom said : we r like the tips of two mountains , Susan , we'll never connect , i hope u'll have a nice life . then he stormed out of her house
    present day .........
    Susan ? SUSAN? shouted Lucas
    Susan came to her self again and asked him : hmmm did u said something ?
    Lucas : i asked u where do u live ? i'll walk u to u house
    Susan: oh yes sorry . i live at the corner of this street .
    she was confused why she had this memory at this moment ?
    maybe because she was staring at Lucas's eyes and found her self making comparison with Tom's eyes
    maybe because Tom eyes color was blue like a sea at a sunny day , and tom's was gray like a cloudy day
    they began to walk slowly to the house
    Lucas : so what brings u here is it a vacation or do u live here ?
    Susan : i wasn't sure , month ago i thought it was a vacation and after a week i decided to move here permanently , i just bought the house and moved my stuff into it
    Lucas : wow , i guess u love this place so much , u left ur old life quickly and moved like this * he snapped his fingers *
    he laughed to himself quietly , wow what a nice voice thought Susan
    Susan : i guess i needed a fresh start i had some savings and i don't use them , so i said to my self why not * she shrugged *
    Lucas : a fresh start ? hmmm don't all we need one sometimes ? *he sighed to himself*


    To be continued... (by hisham.. on sb.. )









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    Default re: (MM/MF) Original Story - Missing Chances - (Ongoing)

    Ok - so last night Hisham did a brand new episode
    Here it is (just copy/paste from sb)


    ...... they reached for the house
    Susan : this is the house , thanx for walking with me
    Lucas laughed to himself , Susan asked with a faint smile on her face : what's making u laugh ?
    he shook his head and said : nothing it seems like a small world just like they say , i actually live close , see that house with the red door , that's my house

    Susan :oh is it ? i'll see u around then , thank u again . she began to turn for the house when he asked : are u free tomorrow night ?


    she looked at him again lifting her eyebrows , and then she asked : are asking for a date ?
    she asked , smiling : wow are u always this forward ?
    he shrugged on shoulder : i'm *go for it * kind of guy , it's u who is leaving without even offering me a glass of water * he smiled at her embarrassed look* besides i just felt like i'll miss something
    if i didn't ask u out
    Susan Scolded her self for her idiocy : dammit Susan ur head must really is swimming high in the clouds
    Susan : yeah sorry , would like a glass of water , it's actually hot in here * she cringed and said : damn Susan u really should shove your foot inside ur mouth now*
    Susan smiled embarrassedly at Lucas :yeah ..... while i bring u water can u find a shovel please ?
    she entered the house then she closed the door slightly , thats when she heard him laugh for real this time
    * damn for this kind of laugh , i'm tempted to make my self more idiot now *
    she came back to him and handed him the glass of water , when their fingers brushed * is this what they say about touch's electricity *
    Lucas looked like he's holding back his smile : don't worry if u say yes to our date i'll remember to bring the shovel with me *he said wriggling his eyebrows *
    she couldn't help but laugh at his eyebrows wriggling : ok then it's a date .
    Lucas said : great ,i'll see u tomorrow then . oh can u just give me ur number ?.
    they stood in front of each in awkward silence until Susan said : well ...... i'll see tomorrow then , bye
    he leaned and gave her a light kiss on her cheek : goodnight Susan . and then he left
    she stood for a while touching her cheek ,and then she said to her self , smiling : i guess he's really *a go for it kind of guy * .......
    .......End of ep 2





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    Default re: (MM/MF) Original Story - Missing Chances - (Ongoing)

    these are the characters

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    Hello dear members of Sup .

    Here's a promo for another story after season 1 of my current story ends . .
    Don't worry though the are related somehow . OK here's the promo .....

    Josh sat in the bar , Drinking his glass of scotch when his phone rang and his sister number showed on the screen .
    he swiped the screen and answered : Hello Susan , just wait a sec ,let get to a quiet place .

    he walked out of the bar and put the phone to his ear : hello again Suse *he said with a faint smile on his lips*
    Susan : Hi hun , how r u today ?
    Josh kept quiet for a while then he said : i ended it with him yesterday *he sighed * .
    Susan : I'm sorry Josh , *she snorted * it appears to me that we the Navarros, meant to experience heartbreak a lot in in our lives .

    Josh snorted back and said : Yeah looks like it.
    Susan : What Do u think of coming here for a vacation ? . And besides i want u to meet someone i'm seeing , he's a nice man .
    Josh : Yeah ? u over him already *he said in a teasing tone*
    Susan : Oh shut up , my world isn't turning around him u know ?
    Josh : ok ok i'm sorry sis *he said laughing * .... i'm really happy for u Susan . ok i'm going to book a ticket , see u soon
    Susan : Ok hun . take care of yourself . bye.
    Josh : u too Suse. bye
    He closed the phone and looked up to the sky , then he began walking to his apartment .
    End of Promo ......


    this is Josh






    if u want me guys to start Josh's story just reply in sb , if u don't want then no problem , i'll just ask my dear Arwen to delete this thread.



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    Default re: (MM/MF) Original Story - Missing Chances - (Ongoing)

    YES Hish I love you Next great story I can't wait to check this one
    Oh boy, Lucas is hot



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    Guys. U have to see what Brain_drops made for Josh's upcoming story.







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    This ep is dedicated to our dear member "Pandora"



    9 Months ago .......

    Tom stood in front of Susan's apartment door , feeling the urge to hold her between his arms like a physical ache .

    he wanted to forget the miserable news he had received this morning . He just wanted to feel reassured and erase everything else from his mind.

    So when Susan opened the door he grabbed her by her shoulders and kissed her , hard and demanding kiss , he kissed her with abandon .

    Susan said when she pulled out from the kiss , trying to get air back to her lungs : "hello to u too "
    Tom : i missed u so much
    Susan said , laughing : " okay , not that i didn't see u this morning "
    He began kissing her nick , biting and licking : "i want u , now " he didn't wait for her answer , he shoved her inside , still kissing her nick when he pushed the door close with his leg........... Ep3 Ends



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    Default re: (MM/MF) Original Story - Missing Chances - (Ongoing)

    NEW! hear the story of mike n sam

    mike was was the big brother of sam's best friend
    mike was in luv with sam since he was 24 and sam was 20.
    he didn't know sam was gay so he hid his feelings for him , and didn't say anything.
    one time mike was in a gay bar, drinking with his friends when he saw sam entering the bar with someone holding his hand
    at that moment some serious mixed feelings hit him , the surprise , the elation , and the disappointment ....
    he was surprised at seeing sam in a gay bar
    he didn't care for his confusion , cause he felt hopeful for the first time in 5 years
    and at the same time he felt worried about the person that was standing beside sam
    sam was searching for seats when he saw mike
    when he saw sam walking at his direction , mike suddenly felt afraid of meeting him , he prayed to god that sam was heading for someone near him instead
    "nope guess he's coming to meet me" he sighed and stood for sam to greet him
    sam hugged him and said " omg, mike i cant believe it's u , aawww i missed u man "
    sam then glanced at his boyfriend and said " sorry, mike this is josh , josh this is mike "
    mike took josh's hand and said "nice to meet u josh " .......

    nd of p1



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    @sweet u'll never get the end of it ,then


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    looks like sweet's revenge is playing to my advantage if u want me to start Mike's story , just click thank u


    God , the number of my unfinished stories .....


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